I enjoy the sound and sensory appeal of this verse.
Good imagery. Especially like "diluting the sour sea".
I love that photo! And the words to go with it are just perfect.
Love your imagery! Thanks for a very refreshing verse!
Yes, "diluting the sour sea" is nice. Very interesting; I won't look at a lemon in quite the same way again.
"the sour sea"yeah, you took me there!I love the pic.
I'm thinking ice cubes and lemonade? I appreciate your spare words -- barbara
@Paul C - glad you enjoyed it :)@The Unknowngnome - really ? thank you :)@Emily Young - keeping in mind that i'm not good in photography, that is quite an encouragement :) @Dr. Kathy McCoy - my pleasure :) be around.
@ds - oh my, what have i done? ;)@Liza Ursu - :) thank you@Barbara - exactly :) thank you.
Hmn, I can almost taste this at the back of my throat - now I am longing for an ice-cool lemonade!
I love this!
Beautiful words..and gorgeous image!Victoria~
My mouth wants lemonade. Nice poem!
@Shrinky - :) me too. it's summer here, it's all i want to live on.@Mama Zen - thank you :)@Kiki - Thankyou for stopping by :)@Vicki Lane - :) thank you
I love this! Both the photograph and your words.
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