Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Shadow me

like the stillness
after a stormy night, I
felt within, a timely

like a realization, in the
birth of light, I saw you;
I saw me in

like a truth, they speak of you;
of me and you, the void
between. And I, alone, hear;

like the permanence of
my soul, the stronger I resist;
I believe, you are meant to

like me, I see you, lost
in sight; when in the darkness
I feel your presence


Italo said...

I saw me in me, that's a perfect sentence! nice poem.

Jill from Killeny Glen said...

I like this one...A LOT. Very passionate.

Janice said...

A lovely poem open to many different interpretations...lots to think about as I read it over several times.

The Unknowngnome said...

The last four lines close beautifully.

Vicki Lane said...

Lovely words and images!

Pat @ Mille Fiori Favoriti said...

A lovely poem, Aparna. Very passionate and full of yearning.

Matt Coughlan said...

I wonder if I
reside in other people's
souls, or only mine


Beautiful, deep, dark, light and powerful -- barbara

Merisi said...

I loved reading your poem,
reflecting about its meaning,
to you, to me.

"I saw me in you" - "feel your presence still"
very powerful emotions.

PremI said...

"like a realization, in the
birth of light, I saw you;
I saw me in
you." Wow!
Expression so intense and clear from start to end....
Beautiful, Aparna.